Thanks to Pat for her feedback on Assignment One. Really useful pointers, suggestions and recommendations. All positive, the overriding messages being what you've done is ok but you need to do more of it! More sketching, more sampling and more observing the world.
I'm already working on Assignment Two and plan to take all Pat's suggestions on board, starting with more extensive sampling and setting myself a challenge of doing some sketching every day, even if it's just a little bit.
Onwards and upwards!